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Song for Rory to try and play. by ~Ed-but-not-Edward:iconEd-but-not-Edward:



Why don't you trust me at all?
Is it because of the stupid things I did?
Why don't you like me at all?
Is it because I broke all those promises?
Why don't you trust me at all?
Is it because I shatterted your veil of faith?
Why don't you trust me at all?
Is it because I crushed your reality?

Tell me,
Is it another reason to hate me?
Tell me,
Is it  another reason to spite me?

Why don't you love me at all?
Is it because I destroyed your tenative side?
Why dont you love me at all?
Is it because I told you told you to deny?
Why don't you love me at all?
Is it because i shattered your restraints?
Why don't you love me at all?
Is it because of a promise I failed to keep?

Tell me,
Is it another reason to detest me?
Tell me,
Is it another reason to spurn me?

And so, it comes to this, the end of everything,
and I couldn't care less about anything.
And so, we are here standing on the edge,
breaking every bone to survive instead.

Tell me,
Is it another reason to loathe me?
Tell me,
Is it another reason to scorn me?

After all, I'd rather leave you behind.
©2009-2010 ~Ed-but-not-Edward
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Author's Comments

Try this one then.

(Edit: Im working on better ones as we speak, keep in mind I wrote this half pissed so its not great).

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:iconkarmacursed:
Lots of repetition, but I like it. It helps focus in on your mesage.

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:bulletred:No one talks back to Ma Duce! :bulletred:
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:iconed-but-not-edward:
Thanks again!

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I <3 Physics. And yea, I know how sad that is...
:iconweebonnielass:
i like :)

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"forgiveness the the scent that the violet leaves on the heel that crushes it..." _ Mark Twain
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Thanks. :)

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I <3 Physics. And yea, I know how sad that is...

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